Birth of Mind

by Justin de Vesine.

Distant flashes of light tumble through the unending dark mist.

Written for SpeedIF Penultimate, this is the story of, uh, Jack.

Language: Nothing remarkable, really.

Plot: It took me a while to find out how to get somewhere- anywhere. The help menu helpfully suggests that one reads carefully. It may be just me, but it still felt a touch unfair. Still. There isn’t much of a plot, and even when a quest comes up, it isn’t clear what to do to achieve it .NPC interaction was nothing short of frustrating.

Mechanics: Nothing special.

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